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Poll
Question: How would you rate "The Coming Storm?" Please leave feedback with your vote.
Option 1: 1 - Barely enjoyable. In dire need of improvement. votes: 0
Option 2: 2 - Somewhat good. Rough, but it showed promise. votes: 0
Option 3: 3 - Competent. The plot was vague, but it worked. votes: 1
Option 4: 4 - Coherent. Despite a few minor bouts of confusion, the plot was understandable. votes: 3
Option 5: 5 - Excellent. Little to no problems, very engaging. votes: 4
Title: Episode Two: "The Coming Storm"
Post by: Serris on March 15, 2015, 04:48:45 PM
Sunday, March 22nd, 2015 @ 1:00 PM EDT / 5:00 PM GMT

With the Geronimo stuck in dry dock undergoing evaluation, the crew found themselves quickly reassigned to the Phoenix, leading the charge into the investigation of the anomaly they encountered two days prior. While they were able to seal it, the ship took on some mysterious passengers, one of whom claims to know the cause of the anomaly.


LCARS Database references for this episode:
     •     Anomaly: Quantum Phase Disturbance (http://www.last-outpost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7872.0.html)
     •     Landmark: Azure Nebula (http://www.last-outpost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7873.0.html)
     •     Landmark: Deep Space Station K-7 (http://www.last-outpost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7874.0.html)
Title: Re: Episode Two: "The Coming Storm"
Post by: Serris on March 22, 2015, 03:02:13 PM
Alright, this thread is now dedicated to reviewing the episode. Please vote and leave your feedback here!
Title: Re: Episode Two: "The Coming Storm"
Post by: alpha249 on March 22, 2015, 03:04:45 PM
Excellent! I enjoyed this episode especially the bar part and the correlation of all characters working together. A few knacks here and there but it's alright :D
Title: Re: Episode Two: "The Coming Storm"
Post by: leXie on March 22, 2015, 04:45:18 PM
I definitely look forward to popping in when I get the chance in the future!

Though I rather embarrassfully had the wrong department colour for a long while, the RP was definitely amusing.

Also, the logistics of casually reassigning over a thousand people was glossed over severely.
Title: Re: Episode Two: "The Coming Storm"
Post by: Serris on March 22, 2015, 05:04:06 PM
A thousand is a bit much. It was glossed over, but the maximum crew capacity of an Excelsior-class ship is about five to six hundred.
Title: Re: Episode Two: "The Coming Storm"
Post by: Klaw on March 25, 2015, 04:31:44 PM
All I can say is, I'm eager to see where we go :)