Episode Fifteen: "Kansas"

Started by Serris, July 13, 2015, 07:40:58 AM

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How would you rate "Kansas?" Please leave feedback with your vote.

1 - Barely enjoyable. In dire need of improvement.
0 (0%)
2 - Somewhat good. Rough, but it showed promise.
0 (0%)
3 - Competent. The plot was vague, but it worked.
1 (10%)
4 - Coherent. Despite a few minor bouts of confusion, the plot was understandable.
1 (10%)
5 - Excellent. Little to no problems, very engaging.
8 (80%)

Total Members Voted: 10

Voting closed: August 30, 2015, 02:47:53 PM

Serris

Sunday, July 19th, 2015 @ 1:00 PM EDT / 6:00 PM BST.

The Phoenix hurtled towards the Tholian-Federation border, shields cascading against the onslaught of fire being thrown at the ship by the trailing fleet. A direct hit to the warp engines injured several of the crew, Captain He in particular receiving a severe blow to the head. With no other options left, the Captain was forced to improvise a bluff. She gave Cameron specifications for a classified particle, and told him to create the illusion that the ship was emitting readings consistent with it. Almost immediately, the Tholians ceased firing and retreated.

Though the ship was left with some downtime, Captain He's refusal to seek medical attention for her injury resulted in her behavior gradually becoming erratic as she lost blood. She ordered that Barnes detain Cameron in the brig, and she started to become incoherent. The problem was compounded when the ship's warp field collapsed, the abrupt deceleration killing the helmsman and sending the Phoenix tumbling down into the atmosphere, crashing into the surface at high velocity.

Who survived? It's anyone's guess...