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Poll
Question: How would you rate "Somewhere Over the Rainbow?" Please leave feedback with your vote.
Option 1: 1 - Barely enjoyable. In dire need of improvement. votes: 0
Option 2: 2 - Somewhat good. Rough, but it showed promise. votes: 2
Option 3: 3 - Competent. The plot was vague, but it worked. votes: 0
Option 4: 4 - Coherent. Despite a few minor bouts of confusion, the plot was understandable. votes: 0
Option 5: 5 - Excellent. Little to no problems, very engaging. votes: 1
Title: Episode Fourteen: "Somewhere Over the Rainbow"
Post by: Serris on June 29, 2015, 03:00:26 PM
Sunday, July 5th, 2015 @ 1:00 PM EDT / 6:00 PM BST.

The Phoenix remained trapped inside the vortex, which began to have deleterious effects on some of the crew. Lieutenant Mores began showing signs of severe mental instability, requiring her to be restrained. Fortunately, the engineering crew, T'Lona, and Lopez were able to figure out a way to escape the anomaly. The ship was cast into open space... surrounded by Tholian ships. A quick jump to warp seems to have bought us some time, but whether or not we'll be able to pull ahead and across the border safely remains to be seen.
Title: Re: Episode Fourteen: "Somewhere Over the Rainbow"
Post by: Serris on July 05, 2015, 02:27:23 PM
I'm rating this one a 2. It had potential, but I feel that the Mores subplot was extremely chaotic and detracted from the story.
Title: Re: Episode Fourteen: "Somewhere Over the Rainbow"
Post by: Scott Archer on July 05, 2015, 03:53:26 PM
Typical... Engineering plays a major role in the story when I'm not there :p
Title: Re: Episode Fourteen: "Somewhere Over the Rainbow"
Post by: Mutatio Nomen on July 06, 2015, 07:33:23 AM
Quotebut I feel that the Mores subplot was extremely chaotic and detracted from the story.

Yeah, what the what was that?