Pilot - Review and Critiques

[Telex Ferra]

Please post why you voted the way you did. Your feedback will help make the SRP better and more enjoyable for you!

We want to know what we did right AND what we did wrong, so please tell us!

[Jenson]

9, had a wonderful time

[Andromeda]

10. While I missed most of it due to technical issues, I effeminately got vibes from the crew.
I could feel the tension and I could see the boiling water getting ready to spill over.

[Klaw]

8

The story is solid - the execution needed a bit of work. (As Telex and I have discussed) - so we're going to work on that

[Lucas Picard]

I would've giving you a 10 Telex because there wasn't much for me to do but I do understand because of what you said to me on skype,
But other than that I had a really good time on your first ever FS Episode!!

Good job!

[Spock]

10. Oh I had great fun being a total prick.

[Mutatio Nomen]

Oh I had great fun being a total prick.

The only reason I didn't vote 10. 

[Martin Thompson]

Yeah I've also talked to Telex about how it went. It was a solid pilot, really good attendance for these days and everyone worked pretty well togheter.

[Paenitet]

I voted 9. I thought it was excellent!

The only negatives I can think of at the moment are:

My character didn't do much, although I thought that's how it'd be only being a junior tactical officer. Also, it ran on until 20:00, a bit longer than your estimate of 19:45 "at most". I was extremely lucky to stay on ther as long as I did, and think that they should be much shorter atleast, and perhaps start earlier.

Apart from that I thought it was great!

[Telex Ferra]

You liked that gasoline line, huh?

[Paenitet]

Hehehe. I suppose so.