Episode Ten - Season One Finale: "Revelations"

Started by Serris, May 24, 2015, 03:27:08 pm

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How would you rate "Revelations?" Please leave feedback with your vote.

1 - Barely enjoyable. In dire need of improvement.
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2 - Somewhat good. Rough, but it showed promise.
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3 - Competent. The plot was vague, but it worked.
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4 - Coherent. Despite a few minor bouts of confusion, the plot was understandable.
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5 - Excellent. Little to no problems, very engaging.
3 (60%)

Total Members Voted: 5

Voting closed: June 14, 2015, 02:49:28 pm

Serris

May 24, 2015, 03:27:08 pm Last Edit: May 31, 2015, 03:12:57 pm by Serris
Sunday, May 31st, 2015 @ 1:00 PM EDT / 6:00 PM BST

Fresh from battle, the Phoenix arrived at K-7 with its Romulan prize. Admiral Chen beamed aboard for Captain He's report on the Romulan incursion. A fairly standard affair, until Chen brought up He's twin sister being in hospice care.

"Admiral, I don't have a sister."

Confused by the discrepancy, the Captain had the Admiral taken to Sickbay by security. There had to be an explanation for that. He directed 78 to uplink to K-7's database and download everyone's personnel files, screening them against their files on the Phoenix for similar discrepancies. Meanwhile, the medical staff examined Chen for any signs of illness or compromised mental faculties.

"His vitals check out, but we had to compensate for a phase variance in the medical scanners."

Phase variance. They'd encountered something similar before. 78's attempt to uplink to K-7's database ran into the same problem. Just what the hell was going on?

Captain He and Nurse Johnson reviewed the medical records of the crew, finding similar phase variances in Commander Vetrel, Lieutenant Winston, Ensign Marcel, and Lieutenant Foster, all of whom came aboard after the Janus incident. Captain He was forced to come to a conclusion...

"This ship and its crew do not belong in this universe."


LCARS Database references for this episode:
     •     Anomaly: Janus Prime Vortex
     •     Anomaly: Quantum Phase Disturbance
     •     Landmark: Azure Nebula
     •     Landmark: Deep Space Station K-7
     •     Landmark: Janus System
     •     Landmark: Tarkeeti Nebula

Serris

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Scott Archer

I enjoyed this episode, I think it was one of the better ones and everyone seemed to have something to do at most points within the plot.



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