Episode Thirteen: "Joshua 10:11"

Started by Serris, June 21, 2015, 02:48:04 pm

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How would you rate "Joshua 10:11?" Please leave feedback with your vote.

1 - Barely enjoyable. In dire need of improvement.
0 (0%)
2 - Somewhat good. Rough, but it showed promise.
0 (0%)
3 - Competent. The plot was vague, but it worked.
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4 - Coherent. Despite a few minor bouts of confusion, the plot was understandable.
3 (50%)
5 - Excellent. Little to no problems, very engaging.
3 (50%)

Total Members Voted: 6

Voting closed: July 05, 2015, 02:46:34 pm

Serris

June 21, 2015, 02:48:04 pm Last Edit: June 28, 2015, 02:47:49 pm by Serris
Sunday, June 28th, 2015 @ 1:00 PM EDT / 6:00 PM BST.

The Phoenix arrived in the brown dwarf system, the star rapidly destabilizing. A Tholian patrol passes by, forcing the ship to hide in the tail of a comet until the star began to go supernova. The Tholians fled the system, allowing the Phoenix a straight shot at the anomaly. Meanwhile, Ensign Lopez was thrown in the brig for insubordination.

Commander Vetrel, Lieutenant Winston, and Lieutenant Foster were put on a shuttle and left behind at the edge of the event horizon. Once they were clear, the ship dove in, using Cameron's warp field theory to try and get home.

Where are they now? With the transition heavily damaging the ship and knocking sensors offline, no one knows.

Tanglepaw12

I felt that this episode was very exciting even at the end of it I was very happy with how it went :)

Scott Archer

The episode was again perhaps a little slow getting started and I feel that people are having to give themselves something to do at times (not necessarily a bad thing.) However, it was a very enjoyable RP, maybe not quite as good as last weeks but still up there, and with great music choices and a great cliff hanger ending. [/size]

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