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Star Trek Daedalus - Episode 6: "Wolf in Sheep's Clothing"

Started by Klaw, January 16, 2016, 03:36:34 PM

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Klaw



Date: July 10th, 2154
POSTPONED Airdate: Saturday, January 30th, 2016 at 13:00 EST (18:00 GMT)

The Intrepid attacked so quickly and effectively that Daedalus has found herself defenseless and unable to respond. Her attacks came with such force that it would appear the scheduled refit had been bumped up, and completed quickly. Apparently with the upper hand, Intrepid is more than a match for the now seemingly crippled Daedalus.

Meanwhile, Back on Earth Gardner and Pierce have been tireless in trying to rebuild. They have taken over a Tactical Operations Room in MACO HQ only to discover that only the two of them are now running the whole of Starfleet. Pierce is using all his Starfleet Intelligence resources to track down the three Admirals that were off-world to inform them of the incident. So far, however, Starfleet has moved slowly, but effectively to deal with the crippling situation at home.

Klaw

Episode Notes:

The episode will start out on Earth, just a couple Hours after Daedalus left... so your characters aren't going to be there... - I'll need volunteers to fill in the following roles for the duration of this story:

Admiral Richard Gardner - Martin Thompson
General Benjamin Foster (Of the MACOs)
United Earth Secretary of Defense Jacques Lebeau - Shoot
Acting Director of Starfleet Security, Commander Charles Wilson - Tanglepaw12
Acting Director of Starfleet Operations, Lieutenant Jonathan Gordon -  Sheia K'Ress
Starfleet Intelligence Operative (Name up to you)
(More can, and will be added as needed)

PLEASE let me know before hand where you'd like to fit in... that way I can relay necessary information to you ahead of time. If you have suggestions for Earth positions, I'm open to them.

Martin Thompson

Just PM me the details about the person you need most Klaw, I'll fill that role.


Klaw

This is TOMORROW!!!!!

Please  - last minute people, please contact me ASAP About Characters on Earth!

Sheia K'Ress

I have an idea for the two unslotted characters


Acting Director of Operations Jonathan Gordon
Intelligence Operative Darius McNeal
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Martin Thompson




Scott Archer


Election Watch and IA Assistant
Email: scottarcher@earthelite.co.uk




Klaw

My Thoughts: The Original Ending revolved around Ramirez and the Intrepid Command staff being agents for "The Organization". As time spiraled on, and we were coming to the end of our second hour.... I figured I should find another way out.

As a result, Intrepid was apparently subject to the same dampening field that was wreaking havoc with Daedalus' sensors. When they found a way to correct for the field's effects, Intrepid made contact and discovered that the once "Alien ship" they attacked, was a fellow star fleet vessel.

Why was the Dampening field in place?
Who put it there?
What happened to the source of "The Organization's" transmission?
What's going to happen to P'Trell? (Who was shot by a starfleet officer on the Daedalus Bridge)
What will Daedalus do next?
(Feel free to insert more questions here, so I can be sure to resolve them the best I can next week!)

All in all, I think the story went nearly as planned. and I think it worked well. Next week, we'll see who our allies truly are. We'll put a face to our enemy, and most importantly, we'll close the direct contact with the Organization for this season (aka, we won't *really* see these villains again until next season*...

*provided we have one...

A slightly farther look at what's coming up: (Titles are still in flux, as the episodes are still being written)

Episode 8: "The MACOs" - Details: [spoiler]We establish the first True Starbase outside of the Sol System[/spoiler]
Episode 9 "Extraction" - Details: [spoiler]A Black Ops MACO team is forced to infiltrate the Klingon Empire to save a High Priority Asset[/spoiler]
Episode 10 "The Undying art of Diplomacy" - Details: [spoiler]First Contact with a 'bizarre' race proves unfruitful - but causes a mess of problems when the alien ambassador returns to his home, dead[/spoiler]
Episode 11 " Orders" - Details: [spoiler] Daedalus finds herself trapped in a region of space in a state of perpetual plasma storms[/spoiler]
Episode 12 (Season Finale) [spoiler]"The Obsidian Order" - Details will not be released at this time.[/spoiler]